The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the number of
films
produced by five countries in the years 2007, 2008 and 2009. The greatest amount of
movies
was created by country A,
where in
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2007 and 2008 it made about 87
films
, the number slightly lowering the next
year
, with approximately 7 units. Country B stands
at
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the
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second place, with 50
films
produced in 2007, and 2008, with a slight increase in 2009, reaching a number of 70
movies
made in that
year
.
On the other hand
countries C, D, and E, are lower on the podium with an average of 15
movies
produced per
year
. The country with the lowest amount of
films
recorded is E, with about 10
movies
per
year
. In conclusion, the first two countries have a more developed film industry compared to the
last
three on the graph because they show a greater amount of
movies
produced each
year
.
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