The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph illustrates the number of

films

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produced by five countries in the years 2007, 2008 and 2009. The greatest amount of

movies

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was created by country A,

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2007 and 2008 it made about 87

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, the number slightly lowering the next

year

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, with approximately 7 units. Country B stands

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second place, with 50

films

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produced in 2007, and 2008, with a slight increase in 2009, reaching a number of 70

movies

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made in that

year

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countries C, D, and E, are lower on the podium with an average of 15

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produced per

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. The country with the lowest amount of

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recorded is E, with about 10

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per

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. In conclusion, the first two countries have a more developed film industry compared to the

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three on the graph because they show a greater amount of

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produced each

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