You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
The graph illustrates the amount of there
goods
transported in the UK by road, water
, rail, and pipeline in million
tonnes
between 1974 to
2002.
Correct word choice
and
Overall
, in
the top of the Change preposition
at
graph
there are two main transporting ways for Add a comma
graph,
the
Correct article usage
apply
goods
in the UK that are growing, this
is by the roads and water
. Also
, there are two remaining ways that are fluctuating and almost staying the same, by railroads and by pipelines.
The biggest way of transporting the
Correct article usage
apply
goods
in the UK is by the roads
. Fix the agreement mistake
road
This
type of transporting
is marginally growing from Change the form of the verb
transport
approximatelly
70 in 1975 to almost 100 in 2000. Correct your spelling
approximately
Similarly
, there is another way of transporting that had been rising was water
. In 1975 the amount
of Change the quantifier
number
goods
transported by water
was 40 million
tonnes
and it was rising
to almost 60 Wrong verb form
rose
million
tonnes
in 2000.
Therefore
, the lowest amount of goods
transported is seen by pipeline, starting almost at 0 in 1975 and growing to almost 25 million
tonnes
in 1980 and remaining steady till 2000. Also
Add a comma
,
are
another way of transporting that fluctuated over Change the verb form
is
this
timeline, this
is by rail. It started at 40 in 1975 andSubmitted by acaitaz on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words goods, water, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 5 times.
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