Many students like to get involved in extra- curricular activities at university such as social clubs and sports. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Nowadays, numerous universities have intensive courses, which makes
learners
stressed and pressured from their studies. Therefore
, students
need some non-academic classes like social clubs and sports. However
, several students
actively and super enjoy these activities
; this
essay will expand on the advantages and disadvantages of this
topic.
To begin
with, non-technical activities
can help students
relieve mental depression. In fact, the environment in university classes is not the same as in secondary school or high school so it is more stressful and pressure and learners
should face more anxiety or enforcement from exams and lessons. Consequently
, restlessness is essential to students
; because it can make students
feel relaxed after a pressure class. Moreover
, it can strengthen various skills
likewise
, teamwork skills
that important part of work
in future that can't select a workmate but still do great qualities of work
that is
why tea work
is important because no one can succeed in work
without harmonious so it can make students
more understanding than in a classroom, interpersonal skills
: not all learners
interests in academics but more talented in sports and some students
can make a lot of new friend from different faculty hence
, it beneficial. As well as
help undergraduates more attention to interact with others and adapt social and teamwork skills
in the classroom.
On the other hand
, extra-curricular activities
in university have some disadvantages also
. For example
, potential distraction: some undergraduates can't focus on several schedules due to
the fact that more concerned with activities
than academic lessons or some clubs are in demand of students
make exclusive conditions by choosing learners
from talented so that few students
feel dissimilar from others. In contrast
,the purpose of the club which build to make learners
feel at ease.
In conclusion, extracurriculars are more beneficial for students
than drawbacks because they also
teach several skills
that can be used in future in the classroom. However
, undergraduates should balance their time with activities
and studies. Besides
, it duties of the staff's club that manage the total of students
who can joys in clubs without partition of abilities.Submitted by np.napatping on
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