The map and chart below show the information for the global willingness to eat insect products and the current price for certain food available on the market place. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map and chart below show the information for the global willingness to eat insect products and the current price for certain food available on the market place. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map depicts the proportion of
willingness
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to eat insect-based
product
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products
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in thirteen different countries around the world, and the line bar graph illustrates the selling cost of a particular diet available in a marketplace.
Overall
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, it can be seen that Mexico has the highest
willingness
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to eat
insects
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products,
whereas
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Japan is the least country that considers
insects
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as food.
On the other hand
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, wild weaver ant is the most expensive food,
while
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rice (Thai Hom Mali) shows the lowest selling
price
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. Interestingly, there is no direct correlation between these data.
To begin
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with, the
willingness
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to consume
insects
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in Mexico reaches 71%, making it the highest percentage among others.
Following
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this
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, Peru and Thailand show a similar proportion, amounting to 58% and 56%, respectively.
Similarly
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, Brazil (45%) and China (44%) follow them.
Then
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, the percentage in Africa (39%), the UK (36%), Australia (34%), Spain (33%), India (33%), and Russia (32%) come after, before the
last
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country, Japan with only 21% of
willingness
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to be
insects
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' consumers. Moving to the chart, the
price
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of
weaver
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the weaver
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ant (wild) is
USD
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10.65 per
kilogram
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, making it high-priced compared
other
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meals. Bamboo caterpillar (
USD
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10/kg) and palm weevil (
USD
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9.35/kg) follow with similar prices.
Then
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, the selling
price
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of the
bombay
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Bombay
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locust, palm weevil, mole cricket, silkworm pupae, field cricket, giant water bug, and house cricket show in a range of
USD
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8-3 per
kilogram
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,
while
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the remaining food's
price
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is less than
USD
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3 in every
kilogram
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, with the rice (Thai Hom Mali)'s
price
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is only
USD
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0.78 in each
kilogram
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words willingness, insects, price, usd, kilogram with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • global willingness
  • insect products
  • current prices
  • marketplace
  • highlighting significant patterns
  • outliers
  • regions
  • discrepancy
  • non-insect-based food items
  • general pattern
  • comparisons
  • notable differences
  • traditional food items
  • main trends
  • implications
  • further research
  • consumption
  • price variation
  • food availability
  • significant
  • observed
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