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The line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph below illustrates data on the household recycling
rates
 from three
countries
,
France
 ,
Germany
 and The United Kingdom over a
ten-years
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ten-year
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 period from 2005 to 2015 .
Overall
 , the UK and
Germany
's
rates
 kept rising over the given duration ,
on the other hand
,
France
's
rates
 continued to decrease over the years despite
it
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apply
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starting at the highest point . Generally,
Germany
 and The United Kingdom started with a fairly noticeable difference ,
however
 ,the two
countries
' household recycling
rates
 kept on increasing throughout the years resulting in the two
countries
 having nearly the same percentage by 2015 .
In contrast
,
France
 began with the highest
rates
 in recycling yet the numbers kept declining
reaching
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to reach
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 their lowest point in 2013 , afterwards the line started going up at a fast pace over a
two-yearyears
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two-year
 period from 2013 to 2015
however
 the major collapse resulted in
France
 having the lowest rate by 2015 . In conclusion,
while
 the UK and
Germany
 showed steady growth in household recycling
rates
 over the period,
France
 experienced a decline followed by a slight recovery, ultimately ending with the lowest rate among the three
countries
 by 2015.
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