Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village
The map depicts the growth of
a
English Change the article
an
village
over a century
. From the late 19th century
to the early 20th century
the growth is primarily focused on a train
station
while
from early
20th Correct article usage
the early
century
onwards the development is centered around newly built major transport
links.
Most of the population
was around the village
center
in the eight Change the spelling
centre
hundreds
but with the completion of the Change to singular
hundred
railway
it quickly shifted towards the Add a comma
railway,
train
station
in the early 19th century
. As displayed in the graph, the original settlement was relatively small in the center
of the Change the spelling
centre
village
near the already existing main road
. However
, a heavily populated area showed up around the Chorleywood Station
the
time the Change preposition
at the
railway
was completed.
In the middle of 19th
Correct article usage
the 19th
century
population
continued to grow around the train
station
but in the late 19th century
settlememts
drastically appeared around the cross points of the newly built motorway and both the main Correct your spelling
settlements
settlement
road
and the railway
. Population
mainly grew south along the Add an article
The population
railway
in the middle 19th century
, covering the crossing of the main road
and the railway
and a great part southeast of the station
. However
, with the completion of the motorway in 1970, population
growth in the rest of the century
shifted entirely away from the railway
station
. In fact, large settlements began growing at the crossing of major transport
links which are
the fastest Correct subject-verb agreement
is
population
growths
seen in the past 150 years.
In a nutshell, Fix the agreement mistake
growth
population
in the Add an article
the population
village
was originally clustered in the center
near the main Change the spelling
centre
road
but with the completion of more transport
routes settlements which grew dramatically chose to live next to the crossing of major transport
links and the train
station
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words village, century, train, station, transport, population, railway, road with synonyms.
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