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The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012

The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012
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The line graph provides information on the diversity in the
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coffee's
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coffee
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export
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 volume of
Brazil
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, Colombia and Costa Rica for
a
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the
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 decade
since
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from
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 2002 until 2012. The units are measured in
million
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kilograms
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. Generally speaking, it is evident that Brazilian people
export
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the
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apply
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coffee
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product
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products
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 the most
compare
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compared
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 to
other
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the other
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 two countries
which
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where
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 the amount
lower
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is lower
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. First and foremost, it is noticeable that for
Brazil
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, the
weigth
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weight
 of exported
coffee
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 in
increase
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 continuously, from approximately 12
million
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kilograms
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 in 2002 reach to 25
million
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kilograms
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 in 2012. Even
weight
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the weight
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 of
coffee
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 in Costa Rica was higher than
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brazil
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Brazil
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estimate
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estimated
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3
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at 3
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million
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kilograms
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 in 2002, but the
export
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 trend
declinded
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declined
 to be 7 in 2006, and fluctuated by rising to 20
million
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kilograms
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 in 2012.
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, the volume
still
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is still
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 lower than
Brazil
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's. For
Colombia
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Colombia's
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 exported amount, at the beginning, the volume
tend
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tended
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 to be uptrend until
in
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apply
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2006,
the
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when the
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 weight was 12
million
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kilograms
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.
Immidiatly
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Immediately
, the
coffee
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 amount decreased significantly to almost
meet
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apply
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2
million
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kilograms
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 in 2008.
In
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 the other hand, Colombia
improve
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improved
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their
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its exports
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export
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 and the trend
was
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skyrocketed and touched the apex with 15
million
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kilograms
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 in 2012.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, export, brazil, million, kilograms with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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