The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart compares the number of
wheat
exports in Australia
, Canada
and European
community from 1985 to 1990.
In general, Correct article usage
the European
Australia
exported the
lowest point, Change preposition
at the
while
the figures decreased in Australia
and just stayed stable in Canada
.
It is clearly seen that in the first year of the period, the wheat
which were
exported rose by around 2 Change the verb form
was
millions
in Change to singular
million
Australia
, whereas
the wheat
saw a slight reduction approximately
2 Change preposition
of approximately
millions
in Change to singular
million
Canada
and about 2.5 millions
in Europe
Change to singular
million
However
, from 1986, the figure declined steadily from 17 millions
to around 11 Change to singular
million
millions
Change to singular
million
at the end
of the period..
Turning to other places, in Replace the punctuation
.
...
Canada
the figure reached a peak at 25 millions
in 1988 before fluctuating and Change to singular
million
stading
at about 19 Correct your spelling
standing
millions
in 1990, at the same number in 1985. Change to singular
million
While
in
Europe community, Change preposition
apply
wheat
exports went up strongly at
about 21 Change preposition
to
millions
and Change to singular
million
became
the highest point in 1990.Verb problem
reached
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Vocabulary: Replace the words wheat, australia, canada, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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