The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart compares the number of
wheat
exports in
Australia
,
Canada
and
European
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the European
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community from 1985 to 1990. In general,
Australia
exported
the
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at the
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lowest point,
while
the figures decreased in
Australia
and just stayed stable in
Canada
. It is clearly seen that in the first year of the period, the
wheat
which
were
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was
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exported rose by around 2
millions
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million
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in
Australia
,
whereas
the
wheat
saw a slight reduction
approximately
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of approximately
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2
millions
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million
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in
Canada
and about 2.5
millions
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million
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in Europe
However
, from 1986, the figure declined steadily from 17
millions
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million
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to around 11
millions
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million
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at the end
of the period
..
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.
...
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Turning to other places, in
Canada
the figure reached a peak at 25
millions
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million
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in 1988 before fluctuating and
stading
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standing
at about 19
millions
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million
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in 1990, at the same number in 1985.
While
in
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apply
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Europe community,
wheat
exports went up strongly
at
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to
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about 21
millions
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million
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and
became
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reached
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the highest point in 1990.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words wheat, australia, canada, millions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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