The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the production process of a biofuel,
ethanol
.
Overall
, it mainly undergoes seven processes: growing of the
plants
, harvesting of the matured
plants
, pre-processing of the harvested
plants
, appearance of the cellulose, processing of the cellulose, appearance of the sugars and addition of microbes to produce
ethanol
. To start with,
plants
and trees absorb energy
such
as sunlight and carbon dioxide to do photosynthesis. After the
plants
grow, they will be harvested and pre-processed to be used. The cellulose of the
plants
then
pass
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through another processing stage. During the process, sugars are taken out. Meanwhile, microbes are added to the sugars. By combining
such
materials,
ethanol
is eventually made. The created
ethanol
, being a kind of biofuel, can be used in different aspects,
for example
in transportation. It is used to generate energy for cars, buses, planes, etc. The use of these transports
then
emits carbon dioxide. Eventually, the carbon dioxide is absorbed by the trees again and runs through the aforementioned seven stages to make
ethanol
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol, plants with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • procurement
  • raw materials
  • milled
  • surface area
  • fermentable substance
  • enzymes
  • yeast
  • fermentation
  • byproducts
  • isolate
  • purified
  • distillation
  • concentration
  • containers
  • distribution
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