The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates how the

sugar

is made from

sugar

cane.

Overall

, it undergoes seven stages which

starts

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with growing the

sugar

canes

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and

concludes

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with drying and cooling of

sugar

. To start with,

sugar

canes

are planted and grown. After twelve to eighteen months, they are matured enough to be harvested. There are two ways to harvest the

sugar

canes

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. People may use tools to harvest them,

in other words

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manpower, or use machines to do the harvesting. After that, the harvested

sugar

canes

are put into a machine

that is

used for crushing. During

this

step, the

sugar

canes

, which are solid

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, are transformed

to

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a liquid. The

sugar

cane juice is

then

purified by a limestone filter and

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put into an evaporator. Inside the evaporator, the juice is heated

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a high temperature and becomes syrup. It

then

processes the centrifuging step.

Sugar

crystals are separated from syrup in

this

procedure.

Finally

, it passes through the

last

step of drying

as well as

cooling the processed materials, and

sugar

is created.