Write about the following topic: The secret to success in life. Getting the right qualifications Contacts You should explain which factor is more important in achieving success, giving reasons to support your answer.

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Some people say that
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university
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education is the best way to achieve
siccess
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success
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others believe it is no longer true.After you
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school you will have one way.They are
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studying
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or running
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.Many younger choose
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university
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because
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think studying
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is easier than studying
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. Personally,When they enter
the
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university
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they think that will be
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everything
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isnʼt true.After
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the
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hard
for
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to find
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job.
University
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education
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necesarry
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necessary
achieve
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success in
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but not
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completely
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arenʼt need for you in the future.
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math
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teacher isnʼt know biology so you know studying hard
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this
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subjects
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need
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enter your enamoured job. At least,
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university
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a university
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education
need
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you but
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it
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before all
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in your job.
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important for you to study science that will help you in the future.I prefer
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because
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necesarry
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necessary
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significant
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.I think
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everything
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task achievement
Try to develop your main idea more clearly by explaining how university education contributes or does not contribute to success.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that your essay has a clear introduction and conclusion that align with the question.
coherence cohesion
Work on creating logical progression and connections between sentences and paragraphs. This will improve the flow of your essay.
task achievement
You've provided a perspective on why university education may or may not lead to success.
task achievement
The essay includes some reasoning and examples related to your main point.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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