The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process of
Use synonyms
honey making
by bees, which Add a hyphen
honey-making
involve
three important stages, including Correct subject-verb agreement
involves
buidling
Correct your spelling
building
nest
, collecting nectar, evaporating, and producing Correct article usage
a nest
honey
.
In general, Use synonyms
honey
production consists of seven steps, and it starts with bees that construct hives with Use synonyms
hexagonal shaped
cells as a place to prepare Add a hyphen
hexagonal-shaped
honey
and Use synonyms
also
a place to produce Linking Words
honey
. After that, the insects leave their nestsUse synonyms
,
and fly to the flowers to collect nectar, which is very important in making Remove the comma
apply
honey
.
After that, the bees return to their hive, they will flap their wings on the cells, which Use synonyms
cause
the air to evaporate through the water in the nectar turning into gas. Correct subject-verb agreement
causes
As a result
, Linking Words
honey
is produced and ready to be served in a glass jar.
In conclusion, the process of making Use synonyms
honey
Use synonyms
bee
is a simple one Fix the agreement mistake
bees
that is
done naturally.Linking Words
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