You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: In some countries there are more young people choosing to enrol in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

There are some nations where younger generations prefer to train

while

working after they graduate from high school

instead

of continuing their studies

further

to a higher institution level.

However

, there are some effects that need to be considered which will be discussed

further

in

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essay. The benefit of

this

issue is they don't have to spend years on a long course offered

in

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universities.

For instance

, they don't have to spend months

of

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doing assignments or hours

of

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listening

lectures

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to lectures

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.

Instead

, they will save more time by learning practical theories required for one specific work. Apart from that,

a

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work-based training

enable

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the student to go straight to an environment of

job

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the job

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as a quick adaptation in today's

job

world.

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, young people who

was

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trained for one specific

job

is

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found to be more comfortable doing their

job

than graduates with a degree certificate.

Therefore

,

this

help

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the trainers to be more

focus

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on their field of

job

to perform better as an employee.

On the other hand

, the disadvantage of

this

is that the majority of young employees will have a hard time getting places for the training because nowadays, most of the company require an excellent academic qualification as part of a resume. As an example, graduates with

a degree certificates

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a degree certificate

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are more likely to have

better

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chance than young people who only have a high-school certificate.

Therefore

, they will get

lesser

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a lesser

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chance to compete in today's world of employment. In conclusion, it seems that more benefits outweigh the drawbacks of

this

issue. It is true that getting enough education

while

at universities can guarantee more on securing a

job

position,

however

, attending a

job

-based training saves a lot of time

while

getting enough exposure to the environment of working.