The map illustrates the changes in Stockford City in 1986 and present time. Summarize the key points and make comparison. Wite the essay in 150 words.
The map depicts the conversion of stock
ford city
in 1986 and in the current era.
After analysing the map, it can be clearly seen that in 1930, in the northeast, there was Correct your spelling
Ford City
a
farmland Remove the article
apply
while
in the northwest shops and post office were located whereas
, in the southwest, there was farmland and river stroke whilst in the southeast, there were large houses
and some area of gardens.However
, in the centre of the map, the primary school was present and the bridge was at the top .
In contrast
, in 2010, large houses
were replaced by retirement houses
furthermore
, new houses
were made and shops were converted into houses
, the farmland and gardens disappeared.Meanwhile, the primary school post office and bridge are in the same place .
houses
were constructed in most of the area.
To sum up
, noticeable changes have been made during the decade hence
the most important modification is the retirement houses
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