The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the number of
flims
created by five Correct your spelling
films
contries
in three different years. The horizontal axis Correct your spelling
countries
represent
the names of the countries Change the verb form
represents
while
the vertical axis represent
Change the verb form
represents
number
of Add an article
the number
a number
films
ز
A showd
that it had the same amount of Correct your spelling
shows
films
created in 2007 and 2008, then
it had a small decline in production to reached
80 in 2009. B remained steady from 2007 to 2008 with 50 Wrong verb form
reach
films
, after that
it had a significant increase to Add a comma
that,
reached
Wrong verb form
reach
it
peak in 2009 with almost 70 Change the pronoun
its
films
. In regard to other countries C , D and E, there were not any huge fluctuation
in Fix the agreement mistake
fluctuations
Correct article usage
the productions
productions
of Fix the agreement mistake
production
films
.
Overall
, A tend
to be the highest country that produced Change the verb form
tends
films
in all three periods of time with more than 80 films
in all the years that
mentioned, Correct pronoun usage
apply
while
E country seemed to be the lowest among all countries with approximately 10 films
every year.Submitted by 361109698 on
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words films with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "represent" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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