The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs compare the percentage of
films
released by genre and the percentage of total ticket
sales
in a specific country in 1996 and 2006. Overall
, while
drama
and comedy
dominated film
releases
in both
years, fantasy
and romance
consistently accounted for smaller shares of both
film
releases
and ticket
sales
.
In 1996, drama
and comedy
made up the largest proportion of films
, with drama
accounting for just over 25% and comedy
around 20%. Fantasy
and romance
, by contrast
, were less popular, representing approximately 12% and 7%, respectively. This
trend persisted in 2006, with drama
films
increasing their share to roughly 35% and comedy
to around 25%. Fantasy
and romance
remained less prominent, with the former doubling to about 15%, while
romance
stayed low at around 7%, five times less than the percentage of drama
films
.
Regarding ticket
sales
, the trend mirrored the film
releases
. Drama
films
consistently represented around 15% of total ticket
sales
in both
years. Comedy
ticket
sales
fluctuated between 20% and 25%, while
fantasy
and romance
remained the least popular genres, each contributing around 5% to total sales
across both
years.
In summary, drama
and comedy
were the most dominant genres in terms of both
film
releases
and ticket
sales
, while
fantasy
and romance
maintained relatively smaller shares throughout the decade.Submitted by checkmyessay9 on
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