The charts below provide the primary reason tourists visited Orange City in two different years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts present the main factors for visiting Orange City in two different years and show each reason with a percentage .
Overall
, it was important that the number of tourists has increased almost twice within 10 years; the most interesting part was that the visitors had a high diamond in restaurants in 2016 and that was the main factor compared to others.
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According to
the charts, at the start, tourists 1 Linking Words
million
in 2006 and reached 1.9 Use synonyms
million
by 2016 which shows that Orange Ciry worked so much hard to attract more visitors; Use synonyms
Moreover
, annual events and museums were the main reason to visit the city in 2006 ; Linking Words
thereafter
, restaurants and annual events have the main factors to visit the city in 2016 Linking Words
while
theatres and others got fewer attractions.
The chart demonstrates that in the beginning , the number of tourists reached about 1 Linking Words
million
in 2006 ; Use synonyms
thereafter
, it grew up to 1.9 Linking Words
million
in 2016 ; Use synonyms
moreover
, Linking Words
museum
factor got much less in 2016 Correct article usage
the museum
while
restaurants were the main one in 2016.Linking Words
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