The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and

2013.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words
The bar chart illustrates data on worldwide
sales
of the most famous mobile phone brands, namely
Samsung
, Apple,
Nokia
and LG,
as well as
ZTE between 2009 and 2013.
Overall
,
sales
of
Samsung
, Apple and ZTE increased during that time,
while
sales
of
Nokia
and LG decreased.
In addition
,
although
Nokia
was a leader in 2009 and 2011,
Samsung
managed to surpass it in 2013. To start, Apple sold the fewest
units
of phones in 2009, particularly less than 50
million
, but after a slight growth, amount of sold
units
constituted approximately 150
million
in 2013. An indicator describing ZTE's
sales
did not change much as it was equal to less than 100
million
units
in both 2009, 2011 and 2013 but with a minimal difference. Demand for LG's production declined and
as a result
, their
sales
went up from above 100
million
units
in 2009 to nearly 80
million
units
in 2013. The figure for
Samsung
experienced only an upward trend,
moreover
, it climbed from about 230
million
units
to almost 450
million
.
However
,
in contrast
with
Samsung
, the number of phones sold by
Nokia
dramatically declined from more than 400
million
in 2009 to about 250
million
units
in 2013.
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