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The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.

The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.
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The figure illustrates how
ethanol
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 fuel is produced from
corn
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.
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, the process of producing
ethanol
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 fuel involves several stages beginning with the harvesting of
corn
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 and ending with the transporting of the final product. First of all,
corn
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 is harvested from fields, after which it is cleaned and ground into a fine powder.
After
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this
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 process, the
corn
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 is cooked in water for four hours and placed in containers to ferment for several days, during which the
ethanol
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 energy source content increases. Following fermentation, the mixture is distilled to separate the
ethanol
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 from the remaining liquid. Apart
from
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, the combination is
subsequently
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 dehydrated to eliminate any remaining water, resulting in a concentrated form of
ethanol
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.
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,the
ethanol
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 is stored in storage tanks and is prepared for use as a renewable energy source. The entire process of transforming
corn
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 into
ethanol
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 includes stages
such
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 as grinding, liquefaction, fermentation, distillation, and dehydration, all of which contribute to the production of high-quality
ethanol
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 fuel.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol, corn with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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