The table shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufactures in the years 2005 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.
The supplied table demonstrates the
amount
of mobile phones sold by producers in the worldwide market over a one-year period.
It can be clearly seen that the highest proportion
of mobile phone
share was for Nokia. However
, BenQ Mobile was
not sell their cell phones as much as other companies.
In 2006, the Verb problem
did
amount
of worldwide mobile sales
for Nokia was 35, (which was the highest amount
of phone
sales
over the period) just ahead of in 2005 which was 32.5. Moreover
, the proportion
of mobile phone
share for Motorola manufactures was 21.1 and 17.7 in 2006 and 2005, respectively.
In contrast
, the amount
of cellphone sales
for benQ mobile was 2.4 in 2006. (which was the lowest proportion
of worldwide sales
over the whole year). Surprisingly, the proportion
of mobile phone
sales
for LG in 2005 was a bit the same as in 2006 at 6.7 and 6.3, respectively.Submitted by TUTOO on
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