Write a letter to the local council. In your letter Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours Suggest what should be done about the problem.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am compelled to write about my profound dismay in context to the system of collecting rubbish from the streets which is adversely affecting me and my neighborhood.
I am Shelly, a resident of Portsmouth
society
. I would like to shed light upon the new system of gathering household waste Capitalize word
Society
is
not working effectively. An employee who is assigned Correct pronoun usage
that is
for
Change preposition
to
this
task do
not collect waste Change the verb form
does
of
every house and often Change preposition
from
do
not show up on assigned days. Another concern is, Correct subject-verb agreement
does
he
Correct word choice
that he
build
several piles of trash on the corner of the street which made Wrong verb form
built
an
area Correct article usage
the
smells
awful.
All the society members and I are really disappointed Correct subject-verb agreement
smell
from
Change the preposition
in
with
by
about
this
situation as it is giving rise to several disease causing
insects in the area and spreading infection among people. An odd odour in the community made it hard for us to breathe.
In Add a hyphen
disease-causing
this
circumstances, I would like you to take immediate action to tackle Correct determiner usage
these
this
issue and keenly address the responsibilities to
an individual who Change preposition
of
work
in our area.
I hope you will give urgent consideration to Change the verb form
works
this
matter.
Yours sincerely,
ShellySubmitted by shellykalra44 on
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single idea per paragraph
Ensure each paragraph contains a single main idea for clearer communication.
logical structure
Enhance logical flow by possibly using more linking words between sentences and paragraphs.
complete response
The letter appropriately addresses the task with a full response, outlining the problem, effects, and proposed solution clearly.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is suitably formal and polite, fitting the context of writing to a local council.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing of the letter are correctly formatted for a formal letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite