The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first given bar chart provides information about the number of marriages and divorces in the USA from 1970 to 2000,
while
the second presented bar chart elucidate
the percentages of Change the verb form
elucidates
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the martial
martial
status of grown-op Americans in 1970 and 2000.
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marital
Overall
, the
married Correct article usage
apply
people
experience
a downward trend, Wrong verb form
experienced
while
the
divorced individuals showed a steady trend throughout the Correct article usage
apply
period
. The married people
was
the highest, Correct subject-verb agreement
were
whereas
the divorced individuals was
the lowest over the Change the verb form
were
period
. In addition
, in both years 1970 and 2000, the percentagees
of married Correct your spelling
percentages
percentage
was decrease
, Change the verb form
was decreased
was decreasing
while
divorced was rose.
Looking in more detail, in 1970, the
marriage accounted for 2.5 Correct article usage
apply
millions
and it Change to singular
million
steady
until 1980 before declining significantly to 2 Add a missing verb
was steady
millions
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million
at the end
of the period
. At the beginning of the period
, the divorced made up 1 million before increasing to around 1,3 millions
in 1980; Change to singular
million
however
, it showed a considerable decline to 1 million in 2000.
In 1970, the married people
predominated the marital status, at 70%, while
it fell noticeably to 60% in 2000. Additionally
, there was a slight decline for
the widowed from about 8% in 1970 to around 6% in 2000. Change preposition
in
In contrast
, the divorced experienced a considerable growth from nearly 2% in 1970 to almost 10% in 2000. Finally
, the never married
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never-married
people
rose from nearly 15% in1970 to 20% in 2000.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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