The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the percentage share of Brazil's economy across five industries in 2009 and 2019, with a forecast for 2029.
At a glance, the finance
industry
holds the highest percentage among the other sectors. It began at 30% in 2009, increased to 36% in 2019, and is predicted to reach 41% by 2029.
In 2009, the tourism and energy industries (oil, coal, and gas) had equal shares of 27%. However
, by 2019, the tourism industry
's share had declined to 21%, and it is projected to remain the same in 2029. In contrast
, the oil, coal, and gas industry
rose to 31% in 2019 but is expected to drop back to 27% by 2029. A similar trend is observed in the food processing industry
, which had 10% in 2009, rose to 20% in 2019, but is forecasted to return to 10% by 2029. The manufacturing industry
started with 21%, decreased to 16% in 2019, and is projected to fall further
to just 5% by 2029.
In conclusion, the finance industry
is projected to dominate Brazil's economy, while
the manufacturing sector is expected to have the smallest share.Submitted by riani.the2 on
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