The graph below shows the average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Swedon, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Swedon, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
line graph illustrates the details about the release of CO2 by
individiuals
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individuals
around 1967 and 2007,in different countries like the United Kingdom,
Swedon
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Sweden
, Italy, and Portugal . It
further
shows the emission of CO2 in metric
tonnes
. As far as the United
Kindgom
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Kingdom
and
italy
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Italy
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is
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are
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concerned, Uk stands high in
this
regard, as in 1997 the inhabitants
discharge
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discharged
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more
then
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than
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10 metric
tonnes
, but a slow decline near
to
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apply
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8
tonnes
was seen in the year
of
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2007.
However
, in Italy the emission was recorded below 5
tonnes
in 1967, which later
remain
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constant from1977-1987, but
in
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at
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the beginning of 2007 it
level
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levelled
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up to 8
tonnes
and
remain
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remained
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the same
through out
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throughout
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the year.
Moreover
, in
Swedon
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Sweden
the average release of carbon dioxide was up to 8
tonnes
, but from 1977 to 2007 a dramatic decline
was notices
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which was around 6
tonnes
.
Therefore
, in
Portugal
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Portugal,
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the discharge of CO2 was under 2 metric
tonns
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tonnes
tonne
tons
, but it climbed near to 6
tonnes
per person per year in 2007.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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