The graph and the chart below show the numer of students choosing different kinds of courses in a university in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and the chart below show the numer of students choosing different kinds of courses in a university in 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the number of
students
who
choosing
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chose
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a
vary
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variety
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of courses in a university in 2012.
Overall
, it can be seen that there were many courses that
university
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the university
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provide
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provides
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such
as social sciences, engineering, health, humanities, science and math, and agriculture. The most of female and male
students
choose
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chose
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was social sciences
course
,
while
agriculture
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the agriculture
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course
was the lowest interest of
students
. In
details
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detail
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, Social sciences was the
most
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apply
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highest
course
that
students
choose
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chose
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, there
was
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were
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4000 female
students
and under 3000 male
students
.
Besides
that, followed by engineering
course
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courses
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, there
was
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were
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many male
students
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who choose
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choose
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chose
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engineering around over
than
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apply
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2000
students
, and for women only 1000. same with science and math
course
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courses
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. male more dominated around
overthan
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over
1000
students
and for women below 1000.
On the other hand
, health and humanities courses
was
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were
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dominated by women almost 2000
students
, and
for
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apply
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male
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males
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around 1000 for humanities and below 1000 for health
course
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courses
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.
In addition
,
agriculture
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the agriculture
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course
was the lowest
course
that
students
choose
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chose
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and the number of male and female
students
were
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was
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same
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the same
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under
the
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apply
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1000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, course with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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