The graph and the chart below show the numer of students choosing different kinds of courses in a university in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the number of
students
who choosing
a Wrong verb form
chose
vary
of courses in a university in 2012.
Replace the word
variety
Overall
, it can be seen that there were many courses that university
Correct article usage
the university
provide
Correct subject-verb agreement
provides
such
as social sciences, engineering, health, humanities, science and math, and agriculture. The most of female and male students
choose
was social sciences Wrong verb form
chose
course
, while
agriculture
Correct article usage
the agriculture
course
was the lowest interest of students
.
In details
, Social sciences was the Fix the agreement mistake
detail
most
highest Change the adjective
apply
course
that students
choose
, there Wrong verb form
chose
was
4000 female Change the verb form
were
students
and under 3000 male students
. Besides
that, followed by engineering course
, there Fix the agreement mistake
courses
was
many male Correct subject-verb agreement
were
students
Correct pronoun usage
who choose
choose
engineering around over Wrong verb form
chose
than
2000 Change preposition
apply
students
, and for women only 1000. same with science and math course
. male more dominated around Fix the agreement mistake
courses
overthan
1000 Correct your spelling
over
students
and for women below 1000.
On the other hand
, health and humanities courses was
dominated by women almost 2000 Change the verb form
were
students
, and for
Change preposition
apply
male
around 1000 for humanities and below 1000 for health Fix the agreement mistake
males
course
. Fix the agreement mistake
courses
In addition
, agriculture
Correct article usage
the agriculture
course
was the lowest course
that students
choose
and the number of male and female Wrong verb form
chose
students
were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
same
under Correct article usage
the same
the
1000.Change the article
apply
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