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Band 8

You are planning to study English at a college in an English-speaking country. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the college. In your letter, ask about the course they offer ask about the cost of the course say what kind of accommodation you want in the college hostel Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you regarding the one-year course offered by your
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. I myself have knowledge of the English language and studied at a Bukhara
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. My family and I are currently going to Turkey.I would like to ask for some information about the
school
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 and accommodation.
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 the ad, your facility is in Turkey, is it in the centre of the city? I hope so, so I can walk to explore more of the city's sights in my spare time. What is the price of your training course?
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, monthly or yearly? I need a year's payment price I hope the price is not expensive. Another thing that concerns me is accommodation. I would like to have a place to study close to my home. One
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 thing I need to mention is that I am allergic to some vegetables, so if the cook can prepare a special meal for me, I can easily eat the
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 meals. I look forward to receiving a prompt reply from your side. Yours faithfully, Shabbona

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Coherence and Cohesion
For stronger coherence, consider organizing related ideas into separate paragraphs. For example, separate paragraphs for course details, cost inquiry, and accommodation requests.
Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure a more logical flow in your letter by arranging your points in a clear sequence. Each paragraph should deal with a particular topic to enhance clarity.
Coherence and Cohesion
The greeting and closing are polite and appropriately used.
Task Achievement
The letter addresses all task requirements: course details, cost, and accommodation needs.
Task Achievement
The tone of the letter is polite and suitable for formal correspondence.
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