The bar chart below shows the percentage of unemployed graduates, aged 20-24, in one European country over of two-year period. Summerise the information and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The diagram depicts the percentage of graduates who are unemployed aged around 20-24 in two different years; 2008 and 2009.

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, both

of

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female and male unemployed

percentage

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are increasing significantly over

two-year

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period.

According to

the diagram,in januaury 2008, the

number

of graduates men who are unemployed started at 10

percent

and decreased to 7

percent

in the next following year.

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the

number

of graduates women who are unemployed began at 7

percent

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and declined to 6

percent

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. In

october

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October

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2008, the

number

of men who

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not have

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a job

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job

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are rising

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rapidly

accounted

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for 16

percent

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. In the same way, the

number

of women who do not have

job

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jobs

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are rising rapidly approximately

at

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12

percent

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. From

januaury

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january

2009 to

july

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July

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2009, the majority of

male

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the male

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unemployed

rate

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rates

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are stable.

However

, the majority of female

unemployed

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rate

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are fluctuations which accounted for 8

percent

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, 6

percent

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and 10

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respectively. Both of the figures

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its

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peak in

october

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2009, the

number

of men unemployed

rate is

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22

percent

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and the

number

of women unemployed

is

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14

percent

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.