The chart below shows changes in three different areas of crime in Manchester city centre from 2003 to 2012.

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in three

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of violation facts in Manchester city in 9 years. Looking at an

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structure, it is readily apparent that, the

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of burglaries

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essentially over the given period,

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of automobile thefts gradually increased. At the initial time frame, burglary was the most imperative crime in Manchester City. Robbery

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more or less the same. With regards to the kind of burglaries, it began with 3400 cases and

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up to 3700 in 2004 .

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dramatically

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1400 in the

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year. Reversely, approximately 2300 auto thefts were in the first year, after which it slowly

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up to 2700 cases in 2012 and reached the highest rate in the ultimate time. One of the

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is that

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robbery was at about 600 in 2003 and

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period.