The chart below shows changes in three different areas of crime in Manchester city centre from 2003 to 2012.

The chart below shows changes in three different areas of crime in Manchester city centre from 2003 to 2012.
The graph illustrates the
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in three
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of violation facts in Manchester city in 9 years. Looking at an
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structure, it is readily apparent that, the
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of burglaries
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essentially over the given period,
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of automobile thefts gradually increased. At the initial time frame, burglary was the most imperative crime in Manchester City. Robbery
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more or less the same. With regards to the kind of burglaries, it began with 3400 cases and
then
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up to 3700 in 2004 .
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after
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it
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dramatically
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about
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1400 in the
last
year. Reversely, approximately 2300 auto thefts were in the first year, after which it slowly
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up to 2700 cases in 2012 and reached the highest rate in the ultimate time. One of the
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is that
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robbery was at about 600 in 2003 and
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unchanged
at the end
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period.
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