The chart below shows changes in three different areas of crime in Manchester city centre from 2003 to 2012.
The graph illustrates the
transforms
in three Replace the word
transformations
kind
of violation facts in Manchester city in 9 years.
Looking at an Change to a plural noun
kinds
overall
structure, it is readily apparent that, the quantity
of burglaries Change the quantifier
number
plunge
essentially over the given period, Wrong verb form
plunged
while
the amount
of automobile thefts gradually increased. At the initial time frame, burglary was the most imperative crime in Manchester City. Robbery Change the quantifier
number
remain
more or less the same.
With regards to the kind of burglaries, it began with 3400 cases and Change the verb form
remains
then
climbing
up to 3700 in 2004 . Wrong verb form
climbed
However
, after
this
rising
it Replace the word
rise
takes
dramatically Verb problem
has
falling
Wrong verb form
fallen
about
1400 in the Change preposition
by about
last
year. Reversely, approximately 2300 auto thefts were in the first year, after which it slowly go
up to 2700 cases in 2012 and reached the highest rate in the ultimate time.
One of the Wrong verb form
went
exception
is thatChange to a plural noun
exceptions
,
robbery was at about 600 in 2003 and Remove the comma
apply
remain
unchanged Correct subject-verb agreement
remains
at the end
of given
period.Add an article
a given
the given
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