"Some people believe that homework is unnecessary and should be banned from schools." To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people
beleive
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believe
that
homework
is unnecessary and should be banned from school. I think that
homework
shouldn't be banned, because if the
students
do not do
a
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homework
again
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home, it’s possible for them to forget dozens of lessons and
also
how to focus on the topics. I think the
students
should pay attention more and more to
homework
, it causes solving math problems better and
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their
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.
Main
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reason is that when
students
do
homework
after school they increase
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knowledge
,
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because they do exercise they have read.
On the other
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parents should pay attention
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sons. When
students
do a lot of
exercise
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, in my
opininon
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opinion
they remember many
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. In
conclusion
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i
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agree that
students
need
a
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homework
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task achievement
Try to present clear and comprehensive ideas by organizing your essay into well-defined paragraphs. Each paragraph should focus on a single main idea.
task achievement
Use relevant and specific examples to support your points. For instance, provide instances of how homework helps reinforce learning.
coherence cohesion
Improve coherence by ensuring that each sentence logically follows from the previous one. Use linking words and phrases to connect ideas smoothly.
coherence cohesion
The essay has a clear introduction and conclusion which helps convey the main argument effectively.
task achievement
The main argument in favor of homework is presented clearly, emphasizing the benefits of doing homework for reinforcing learning.

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