The graph below shows the pollution levels in London between 1600 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the rates of pollution in the city of London. The timeline is between 16
century
and 20 century
.
Overall
, there are two different elements sulphur dioxide and smoke. Pollution levels count in micrograms
per cubic metre.
As seen in the line graph, both lines were the same in 1580, nearly 0 micrograms
. In approximately 1750 all had increased, however
, the proportion of dioxide was much better. Almost 750 micrograms
, while
the other one
had only 250. Both had decreased for 10 years, but after that, their results had
improved until the 19th Unnecessary verb
apply
century
. In 1850 sulphur had its peak and reached an unbelievable index, almost
900 per cubic metre. 50 years after smoke had risen to 500 Change preposition
of almost
micrograms
and reached the best result.
As shown in the illustration, the situation had decreased starting in the first half of the 20th century
. The rate of smoke overtook the second one
, and the first one
and second
Add an article
the second
one
had 270 and 260, respectively. Nearly to
2000, both have the minimum results as Change preposition
apply
it
were in the start.Correct pronoun usage
they
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