The table below shows how much children (aged 7-15) spend per week on various items. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.
The illustration demonstrates the spending habits of
boys
and Use synonyms
girls
in the age range of 7-15 on various items.
Use synonyms
Overall
, both Linking Words
the
genders like to spend significantly on buying snacks or beverages and other food items. Correct article usage
apply
While
the male pupils spend the most on games, toys and pets, their female counterparts allocated the highest for fashion and footwear.
In terms of specific figures, games, pets and toys tend to be bought the highest by Linking Words
boys
of Use synonyms
this
age, almost double Linking Words
of
what Change preposition
apply
girls
their age spend on Use synonyms
this
category ( 2.5 per Linking Words
week
vs 0.9 per Use synonyms
week
). Contrarily, Use synonyms
girls
spend the highest on clothing and footwear, which Use synonyms
boys
don’t seem to enjoy a lot(2.7 vs 1.2). Use synonyms
However
, both genders spend the second highest on buying food items and beverages with an average of nearly 2.3 per Linking Words
week
, in each.
Use synonyms
Boys
invest the least in personal care, one-sixth of what Use synonyms
girls
like to put in(0.1 vs 0.6 per Use synonyms
week
). Computer software is another category where Use synonyms
boys
spend a considerable amount of money, unlike Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
girls
, who spend the minimum in Use synonyms
this
( 1.3 vs 0.2 per Linking Words
week
). Both Use synonyms
boys
and Use synonyms
girls
Use synonyms
,
spend a modest amount on other expenses, physical activities and Remove the comma
apply
in
buying magazines or stationeries and music.Change preposition
apply
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