The graph and the chart below show the numer of students choosing different kinds of courses in a university in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and the chart below show the numer of students choosing different kinds of courses in a university in 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration describes the
number
of students selecting different kinds of courses in a university in 2012.
Overall
, the majority of enrollees both male and female have
choosen
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chosen
Social
Sciences
as their course. Meanwhile, Agricultural
subject
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is
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the least popular for both categories
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the university. The college which is popular among the female enrollees belongs to Social
Sciences
with 4000
number of
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students. It was
subsequently
followed by other colleges
such
as Health and Humanities with almost half of the
population
compared to Social
Sciences
with nearly 2000 female learners.
Additonally
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Additionally
, there were 1000 female scholars who
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choosen
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chosen
Engineering
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an Engineering
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course
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courses
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which is fifty
percent
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lower compared to
Helath
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Health
and Humanities
population
.
However
, Science and Math were merely popular with nearly 500
enrolless
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enrollees
. It was
then
followed by the least popular to the
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enrollees
enrollee
enrolled
which is Agriculture with only below 500 learners.
On the other hand
, Social
Sciences
garnered the highest
number
of male enrollees with almost 3000 students. It was
then
followed by
Engineering
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an Engineering
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course with more than 2000 people, which is one-third of the
number
of male Social
Sciences
. It was
then
followed by courses
of
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Humanities
and
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Science and Math with more or less 1000 scholars which is half of the Engineering's
population
. The least popular were Health and Agriculture with less than 1000 in
population
.
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