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agree with it. In
this
era,
parents
tend to use
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,
and television to distract their
children
from
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age. Because it can bring immediate effects on comforting and
their
children
. It causes a lot of child
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those
devices
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can provide
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to
themselves. It makes the
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harmful for their development.
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action to reverse the situation as soon as possible. In
this
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will talk about the effects of massive screening
time
to support my point of view.
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that long screening
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concentrated
time
to focus on the task. The researchers indicated that
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stimulation on those media,
such
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,
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always provide new
and excitement to
children
. It causes
children
can only focus on something
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.
Therefore
parents
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their
screen
time
to prevent their
children
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on studying and working in the future.
second,
about affecting
children
's
body
health. Watching
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and playing computer are using
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for a long
time
. it may cause
children
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exercise and it may cause obesity and
also
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they are in the period of growth which is
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stage for their development. A good
body
strength can help them avoid the infection and influences of bacteria.
Besides
, long
screen
time
may affect their
body
health by the wrong sitting posture too. They may have
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if they always look down the phone. So
parents
have to monitor the screening
time
of their
to protect their
body
health.
'
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for
children
to explore and learn. But it
also
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children
.
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that
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for
children
. It is not
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rocket science to let
children
have less screening
time
. Maybe some
parents
may
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limiting their screening
time
will worsen their relationship. But the most particular part is to
with your
children
, exchange your ideas with them and set up a rule on using those
devices
.
devices
are not the new black, is
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parents
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parenting style and cooperate with
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kids and protect them.