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advanced technology makes
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widely spread around the world, It can deepen the linkage of
people
around the world, receiving new
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anytime anywhere.But there are some
people
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that
people
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it. And
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strongly disagree
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this
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think
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is a place to share our own
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everyone
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the globe. I am going to show my point of view by different aspects.
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.
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is for everyone to share their
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knowledge and
also
advertising for companies. If
people
have to pay for the
internet
,
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will be fewer users on
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there are many
in poverty. They cannot afford the
internet
fee. It makes
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in less developed
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to use
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. The information from those
countries
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there is a gap between more developed
countries
and
developed
countries
, information
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areChange the verb form
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not accessible to other
countries
will lead to the result that the
is not
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. Not just
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countries
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may not afford the fee,
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them only
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may exploit the learning
freedom
and opportunities of those children. As
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result, the wealth gap will widen. Human rights and
freedom
will be reduced
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the news cannot be shown to the public, it breaks the original aim of
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to connect everyone in the world.
second,
it
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the
freedom
of speech. As
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just
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,
people
who can afford the fee cannot share their
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and
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on the
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. It will limit their
freedom
of speech
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there
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no platform for them to express their needs,
ideas
and opinions. Which
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people
who pay for the
internet
have greater power
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people
's thoughts and speaking. And
people
who didn't pay for will have no platform for them to speak up. It may cause the
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society
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and block
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communication
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different
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. To reduce the
of
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society, accessing
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.Change preposition
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