The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The

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pie charts depict the percentage of different items being sold in online

sales

of

retail

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the retail

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market in Canada from the period

of

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2005 to 2010.

Overall

, it is evident that Electronics & Appliances had

a

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highest proportion of

sales

in both years.

Whereas

, a few percentage of video games and home furnishings were sold in 2005 and 2010 respectively.

To begin

with, Electronics & Appliances had 35% of

sales

in 2005 which

decline

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to 30% after 5 years.

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,

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less than a quarter of food & beverages were purchased in 2005 and

then

sales

increased to 32% in 2005. A similar trend was

also

observed in the

sales

of home furnishing materials where

sales

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from a quarter in 2005 to only 15% after a

half decade

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.

Futhermore

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Furthermore

, video games account for a

minior

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minor

of

sales

, a less

then

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than

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a fifth percentage were sold in 2005.

However

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after a period of five

years

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sales

jumps to 23%.