The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
given
pie charts depict the percentage of different items being sold in online Verb problem
apply
sales
of Use synonyms
retail
market in Canada from the period Correct article usage
the retail
of
2005 to 2010.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, it is evident that Electronics & Appliances had Linking Words
a
highest proportion of Change the article
the
sales
in both years. Use synonyms
Whereas
, a few percentage of video games and home furnishings were sold in 2005 and 2010 respectively.
Linking Words
To begin
with, Electronics & Appliances had 35% of Linking Words
sales
in 2005 which Use synonyms
decline
to 30% after 5 years. Change the form of the verb
declined
Moreover
, Linking Words
a
less than a quarter of food & beverages were purchased in 2005 and Correct article usage
apply
then
Linking Words
sales
increased to 32% in 2005. A similar trend was Use synonyms
also
observed in the Linking Words
sales
of home furnishing materials where Use synonyms
sales
Use synonyms
drops
from a quarter in 2005 to only 15% after a Wrong verb form
dropped
half decade
.
Add a hyphen
half-decade
Futhermore
, video games account for a Correct your spelling
Furthermore
minior
of Correct your spelling
minor
sales
, a less Use synonyms
Linking Words
then
a fifth percentage were sold in 2005. Correct your spelling
than
Linking Words
However
after a period of five Add a comma
However,
years
Add a comma
years,
sales
jumps to 23%.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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