The graph below shows how elderly people in Europe spent their free time between 1980 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates
the
how Correct article usage
apply
the
old Correct article usage
apply
people
in Europe spent their leisure time
from 1980 to 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that there were many activities that elder people
in Europe did such
as Reading, Hiking, Theatre, Watching TV, Surfing
the internet. The highest activities that old Correct word choice
and Surfing
people
did was hiking and the lowest was theatre.
In detail, in 1980 around 60% Change preposition
of elder
elder
Correct your spelling
older
people
spent their time
to watched
Wrong verb form
watching
tv
, followed by theatre around 50%, and Correct your spelling
TV
then
reading activity, there was 30 percent
of old Change the spelling
per cent
people
spent their leisure time
just reading. There was
20% of older Unnecessary verb
apply
people
spend
their Wrong verb form
spent
time
only for
hiking and around Change preposition
apply
under
10% Change preposition
apply
older
Change preposition
of older
people
did surfing the internet. Hiking activity increase
sharply until 2010 around 80%. Change the verb form
increases
Besides
that, watching TV activity increase
gradually around
70% and Change preposition
to around
decrease
again in 2010 Wrong verb form
decreased
overthan
60%.
Correct your spelling
over
In contrast
, in 1980, around 30% of elder people
in Europe spend
their Wrong verb form
spent
time
for
reading and Change preposition
apply
increase
in 1990 Wrong verb form
increased
around
40% and Change preposition
to around
decrease
again in 2000 Wrong verb form
decreased
about
20% and 10 years after Change preposition
to about
increase
sharply Wrong verb form
increased
until
60%. Change preposition
to
In addition
, around below
10% Change preposition
apply
older
Change preposition
of older
people
did surfing the internet and
slowly Correct word choice
which
increase
in 2000 Wrong verb form
increased
around
Change preposition
to around
overthan
10%, and Correct your spelling
over than
increase
significantly Wrong verb form
increased
around
50% in 2010.Change preposition
to around
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, time, increase with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 10 times.
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