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Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village
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Chorleywood a village neighbouring London, experienced an expansion from 1868 to 1994 because the population of citizens rose consistently in the start from the middle of the nineteenth century. The diagram illustrates the evolution of the town.
According to
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 the map, the town experienced an enlargement until 1994 which has some facilities
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 as main road, motorway and railway. In 1868, Chorleywood was a small town and only had a main road until 1883. The village was constructed
then
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 became bigger and extended to the south between 1883 and 1922. The railway was built in 1909 and is located between two new townships that were established on the west and east. The Cities experienced construction around three new complex places in the southeast and two districts in the northeast where in the middle there was a roundabout. When the motorway was built in 1970, the five new places were started to pass out by motorway and remained until 1994.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • village
  • population
  • increased steadily
  • middle of the nineteenth century
  • development
  • location
  • factors
  • contributing
  • physical
  • infrastructural
  • effects
  • conclusion
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