The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.
The given diagram gives a demonstration of the way instant noodles are industrially made. The process that transforms raw material into probably the most effortless and delicious meal at the same time, consists of only eight simple steps.
Firstly
, the flour is collected from the storage silos and transported to the establishment of production, where a mixer is combined with water and oil to form a dough. Linking Words
Then
, the mixture passes through some rollers that transform it into thin dough sheetsLinking Words
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and afterwards is precisely cut into dough strips to obtain noodle discs. Remove the comma
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Next,
they are cooked in cooking oil and Linking Words
then
dried out.
Once dried completely, the discs are allocated in some cups Linking Words
along with
vegetables and spices to get the familiar flavour of noodles everyone loves. Linking Words
Lastly
, the product is sealed and labelled and now is officially ready to be sold in every supermarket around the world.Linking Words
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