Some people believe that to reduce the amount of time people spend commuting (travelling to work), parks and gardens close to city centres should be replaced by apartment buildings for commuters to live in. However, others disagree with this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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firmly disagree with

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will elucidate why the walkways are essential

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they should not be eliminated .

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the job to the cities is an issue ,a lot of

people

daily drive to urban areas

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is impacting the environment

adversly

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adversely

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vehicles is going to pollute the natural ecosystem .When

people

inhale that polluted air,

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causes the different

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of ailments among the masses.So,to reduce

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,the only solution is to minimize the traffic by shifting the

people

closer to their workplace. another heated

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favor of the idea is that it saves

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time in travelling which

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the workplace or in some other productive activity.So, in

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is the money .

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,another group of

people

argue

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against

it they

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believe

that ending up

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in gardens

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and

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creates drastic impacts

itself

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.If there are no trees and

gardens

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would increase the greenhouse

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the world which will raise the

temprature

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temperature

significantly.

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, the countries which have less

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greenery

expeirnce

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experience

hot

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weather

throughout the year.If we keep on ending the

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greenery

that would in turn exert its effects on the life of birds and a few types of other animals.

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,the species of a few birds are

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extinct in the cities because they do not have the proper

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for their nests and food. In conclusion ,

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of

gardens

and parks is causing more

damages

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damage

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than pollution by

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cars and traffic.So,I believe that

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goverment

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government

should formulate

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policies that

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the masses to grow plants .There should be the proper funding to create

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balance

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infrastructure .