The diagrams below show the development of the horse over a period of 40 million years. write a report a univeraity decribing the information shown below.

Given the diagrams illustrating the horses’ development over 40

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years

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. It is evident from the information provided that there are four main evolutions involved. In the first stage of horses' evolution, the period is 40

million

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years

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ago and the

horse

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is denoted by Eohippus, the

body

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size was small, the tail was short, there was no

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mane

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in the neck, and the foot had five

toes

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.

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second phase, the period

of

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30

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years

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ago, the

body

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size

was became

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bigger, the legs, tail and neck

were became

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longer, and the neck had some

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cover

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it, the obvious change is the

toes

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,

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from five

toes

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to three

toes

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, and the middle toe is bigger than other two

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. Coming to the third section, it came to 15

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years

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ago, the

body

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size

overall

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was bigger than

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second stage, and

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mane

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became

more

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dense,

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toes

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joints became

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and the middle toe became longer. Next to the

last

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period, namely modern, the appearance looks like today’s

horse

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, the

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has evolved very maturely, all of the

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parts became longer, and

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mane

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were

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very thick, the major change was the

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were

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evolved to hoofs.

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diagram shows about

horse

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’s evolution, and can learn the process of how an ancient

horse

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became today’s modern

horse

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, the most eye-catching part is the change in the foot.