The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel’s customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.

The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel’s customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.
The pie charts illustrate the results of a survey that asked 100 visitors with the same
questionaire
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questionnaire
to the Parkway
hotel
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how they rated the
hotel
's customer service from 2005 to 2010.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the proportions of good and excellent rates increased
while
those figures for satisfactory, poor, and very poor rates decreased over the period shown. Remarkably, the highest proportion of guests's
anwers
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answers
about Parkway
hotel
service is good . Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that in 2005, the percentage of
costumers
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customers
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rated Parkway
hotel's
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Hotel's
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service
is
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as
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satisfactory
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