The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
The two bar charts depict the post-graduation career paths of UK graduates and postgraduates in 2008, excluding those who entered full-time employment. Both groups show similar trends, with
further
education being the most popular option, followed by part-time work
, unemployment, and volunteering, which had the fewest participants.
Among graduates, just under 30, 000 pursued further
studies, while
16, 235 were unemployed—approximately half that number. Those engaged in part-time work
numbered slightly higher at 17, 735. Volunteering was the least common choice, with five times fewer participants than part-time work
.
In contrast
, the number of graduates in the study was nearly ten times greater than postgraduates. Among postgraduates, 2, 735 chose further
education, while
1, 675 were unemployed. Interestingly, part-time work
deviated from the tenfold pattern, with a relatively high figure of 2, 600. Lastly
, volunteering remained the least popular choice, with just 300 participants.Submitted by bh.iderzaya on
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