The graphs below show three exports from South East Asia and the four sources of revenue for 1970 and 1995. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graphs below show three exports from South East Asia and the four sources of revenue for 1970 and 1995. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The graphs represent 3 exports from South East Asia and the medium of
revenue
for 1970 and 1995. The data is calibrated in graph form. I will elaborate on the features with relevant comparisons
further
. We can observe that the
export
rate keeps on fluctuating over time.
Also
, the source of
revenue
for South Asia changed with time. In 1970,
revenue
from domestic was highest (33%) .
Revenue
from tourism and
export
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was pretty much the same( around 28 per cent).
Revenue
from other sources was 11%. In 1995, There was a significant difference in
Revenue
for 2 reasons. It rose up to 54%
revenue
from exports and other sources were almost the same (13%). Domestic
revenue
was 21% in 1995. In 1970,
export
of other raw materials was highest, which was later overpassed by manufactured products in 1977 and remained highest till 1995.
Export
of timber remains least among all (15 in 1970 goes up to purchase in 1980 and become 10 in 1995).
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