There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couples who decide to do this.

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Child
', the word
child
itself sounds like happiness and joy.
Although
having a
child
is a bit of a debate nowadays. Many argue that whether they should have
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or not.In
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paragraph, I will discuss my opinion.
Children
are important in order to continue once
haridity
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aridity
heredity
humidity
and pass on DNA.
Children
teach many things to their parents and help them
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their mental health and social skills
Children
provide a nice environment in a family.
According to
a report conducted by Howard University in
United
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the United
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States of America, families with
children
are more happy and
satisfied
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than
the
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families not having
children
.
According to
that study, having
children
reduced the chances of conflicts between husband and wife,
thus
reducing
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of divorce.
However
, some
people
do not have time to raise their
children
, so they drop the idea of having
children
,
although
some
people
have time but want to live freely in life and enjoy their own life and want no stress.
However
, some parents do not have.
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because they think they are not ready for raging them.Many
people
don't have kids because they do not want any responsibilities. At
last
, I want
to conclude
that having a
child
is an individual choice and
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on one's situation and thinking .There should be no debate on having
a
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children
or not because in some cases
due to
pressure from society,
people
decide to have kids but later they find difficulty in their personal lives and struggle to raise their kids properly.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • childfree
  • personal freedom
  • financial stress
  • raising children
  • nurturing the relationship
  • societal pressure
  • stigma
  • support network
  • companionship
  • legacy
  • regret
  • intimate bond
  • norm
  • invest in experiences
  • close-knit
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