Some people believe that allowing their children to make their own choises on every day matter (such as food,clothes and entertainment ) is likely to result in a society of indevisualse who only think about their own wishes .other people belive that it important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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number of

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make their own choices, they will

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independent in the future and many other advantages.

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other believe if

children

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the choice of everyday

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will result in a selfish generation. I personally think given kids the choice for their daily matters it's so important to build their character but it should done wisely with some limitations and rules. On one hand, giving

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children

the freedom to choose their clothes, food, and entertainment,

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would lead to

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generation, that

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exactly what they want and what should they do. Even though that

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it should done

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the child in the kitchen and

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him to prepare his meal, the parent can offer two or three meals and make him choose between them. That will definitely make him analyze his options and make logical choices, and that could only done under the guidance of

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On the other hand

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people

see these practices would

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young

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to disobedience. They believe that

children

don't have enough awareness to make their own

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and that not only would use a selfish and rebellious kid but

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make

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them an unhealthy routine and practices. Which could affect both physical and mental health

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leading health organization, obesity problems are very common among young

people

, who make their own choices without the guidance of their parents.

To conclude

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giving

children

the power to choose is

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powerful way to build their personality and develop their skills. It

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could lead to dire consequences if not implemented in a proper way. So making plans and

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young

people

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to choose logically is the best way to ensure

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safety.

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, putting punishment and rules is

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approach to keep them within limits.