Writing task 1Writing task 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

In

this

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these

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modern days, the

usage

of

computer

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computers

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is undeniably important. Even children use

computer

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computers

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to complete their school

assignment

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assignments

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. It is agreed

however

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, however

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, that using

computer

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computers

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daily

have

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has

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more negative than positive

outcome

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outcomes

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. It can lead to addiction,

as well as

poor

implication

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implications

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to

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for

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health.

Firstly

, uncontrolled

usage

of

computer

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computers

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could

caused

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cause

be caused

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a child to be

dependant

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dependent

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on technology.

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, children who

lacks

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lack

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parental supervision

tends

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tend

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to use

computer

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computers

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every second of every day. They will be engaged in their own world using

computer

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the computer

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even during meals and when it is being taken from them, some might throw

tanthrums

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tantrums

.

Hence

,

while

some children can be controlled by their parents to limit screen time, most might be affected by the negative impact of

computer

usage

.

Secondly

,

computer

leads to

sedentary

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a sedentary

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lifestyle.

For instance

, many kids if not all, enjoy playing games on their

computer

.

This

will take up hours on their games on the

computer

instead

of playing outside and interacting with their friends. Not only

this

can

leads

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lead

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to obesity but it can

also

leads

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lead

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to poor social skills.

Therefore

, daily

usage

of

computer

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computers

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can lead to poor health

outcome

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outcomes

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. In summary,

computer

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computers

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has

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have

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become an important means

for

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of

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teaching and learning at school. Unfortunately, daily

usage

of

computer

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computers

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might cause addiction and ill-effect on health.

Hence

, it is important that strict parental guidance

been

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be

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taken to reduce and avoid these poor outcomes.