The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph presents the shop's movie renting and selling data every year from 2002 to 2011.
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it is clear that
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the number of DVD
sales
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became the majority since 2004. A downward trend can be seen in rentals. Blu-ray
sales
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and VHS
sales
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accounted for very low numbers in
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10-year period. Looking at the chart more closely, one can see that originally the dominant type was the rentals.
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, a Death Cross happened in 2004, and the DVD
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took the place of it. From that moment, it had more than 150,000
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. In these ten years, the figure for rentals lost approximately 117,000. The lowest proportion can be seen in
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the
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Blu-ray
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category, and in the first five years, the number was almost zero.
Subsequently
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, it was growing slowly, and in the end, it was nearly 10,000. Another decrease pattern can be seen in VHS
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, and it seems that no one wanted to buy
this
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from 2006.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales with synonyms.
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