The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the outcomes of research carried out in five cities (
Sydney
,
Melbourne
,
Brisbane
,
Adelaide
, and
Hobart
) in Australia about how many people bought and drank
coffee
in the recent four weeks.
Overall
, the percentage of city residents who went to a cafe for
coffee
or tea in the
last
4 weeks was higher in most of the cities,
whereas
the buying rate of fresh
coffee
was lower than among the three categories in all of the towns. In terms of buying fresh
coffee
,
Sydney
's people showed the highest result around 44%, followed by
Melbourne
just below 43%.
Although
Hobart
's people bought proportion was approximately 38%,
while
the two cities (
Brisbane
and
Adelaide
) performed similar results at 34%. In terms of going to cafes,
Melbourne
showed the highest result,
near
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64% very close to
Hobart
's rate, which was around 63%.
On the other hand
,
Adelaide
's almost half of the total population went to a cafe for
coffee
or tea in the previous 4 weeks. The rates of
Sydney
and
Brisbane
were around 61%. and just above 55% respectively.
Hobart
gave the highest result in terms of buying instant
coffee
.
Although
Sydney
was near 45%,
however
, other three (
Melbourne
,
Brisbane
, and
Adelaide
) were around one-half of the total residents.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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