The two pie charts show the percentage of pollutants entering a particular part of ocean in 1997 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph
protrays
the Correct your spelling
portrays
porportions
of Correct your spelling
proportions
proportion
Polluntants
like Pollutants from Correct your spelling
pollutants
air
, Add an article
the air
fram
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farm
waste
, industrial waste
, litter, marine, offshore oil and domestic sewage entering the surface of ocean
at specific parts in Add an article
the ocean
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the year
year
1997 and 2007.
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years
Overall
, most
amount of Add an article
the most
polluntants
came from Correct your spelling
pollution
air
which is almost 30% in both years. Meanwhile, litter and industrial Add an article
the air
waste
decreased in 2007 including farm waste
and marine.
On the other hand
, Domestic sewage increased to 29% compared to in
1997 when it was 18%. Offshore oil went Change preposition
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upto
14% in 2007. comparitively it was around 5% in 1997.Correct your spelling
up to
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