The two pie charts show the percentage of pollutants entering a particular part of ocean in 1997 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two pie charts show the percentage of pollutants entering a particular part of ocean in 1997 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph

protrays

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portrays

the

porportions

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proportions

proportion

Polluntants

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pollutants

like Pollutants from

air

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the air

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fram

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farm

waste

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, industrial

waste

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, litter, marine, offshore oil and domestic sewage entering the surface of

ocean

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the ocean

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at specific parts in

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the year

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year

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years

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1997 and 2007.

Overall

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most

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the most

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amount of

polluntants

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pollution

came from

air

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which is almost 30% in both years. Meanwhile, litter and industrial

waste

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decreased in 2007 including farm

waste

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and marine.

On the other hand

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, Domestic sewage increased to 29% compared to

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1997 when it was 18%. Offshore oil went

upto

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up to

14% in 2007. comparitively it was around 5% in 1997.

irsamahmoodFri Oct 11 2024

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

94 words

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