The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart depicts the
number
of
tourists
visiting a distinct
island
in the Caribbean Sea between 2010 and 2017, measured in millions.
Overall
, the total
number
of visitors increased significantly over the period, despite some fluctuations in the categories of
tourists
staying on cruise ships and those spending nights on the
island
. Both groups showed considerable growth by 2017 compared to their figures in 2010. In 2010, the total
number
of
tourists
was 1
million
, and
this
figure rose steadily over the next two years, reaching 1.5
million
by 2012.
However
, between 2012 and 2014, the
number
of visitors surged dramatically, climbing to 2.5
million
. Following a period of stability from 2015 to 2016, the total
number
of
tourists
experienced a sharp increase, peaking at 3.5
million
by 2017.
Although
the
number
of holidaymakers staying on the
island
remained unchanged during the first year, it began to rise over the subsequent two years, eventually reaching approximately 1.25
million
. From 2013 to 2015,
this
figure stabilized, before increasing once again, culminating in 1.5
million
by 2017.
In contrast
, the
number
of
tourists
staying on cruise ships experienced five years of fluctuations before surpassing the
number
of those staying on the
island
in 2015.
This
trend continued, with cruise ship visitors reaching their highest point of 2
million
in 2017.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, tourists, island, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 8 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuating trend
  • initially
  • significant increase
  • slight decline
  • momentary setback
  • steady increase
  • minor fluctuations
  • reaching a peak
  • moderate growth
  • notable growth
  • surge in popularity
  • seasonal or yearly factors
  • stagnation
  • growing appeal
  • visitors worldwide
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